Usually when I read your stuff in the freestyle thread, i kinda feel like you use spaces in place of where you'd place a comma instead. I don't know what style you prefer to write freestyles (Couplets, Quads, etc), it just looks a little more disorganized to read lol.
I personally like using double/triple couplets to write, I even got another guy (who's afk from the thread due to a move recently) to adopt using double couplets and his stuff's pretty insane now.
When I freestyle, normally I'm already shooting for some kind of theme in mind.