Don't you put this blame on me Ricky Bobby.

[Sean]

V1

V2

Made this with a GIMP tut so yeah. See and Sea.

Damn I just realized this isn't even sharpened. So I may update in a little while.

 

[Random Queen]

I actully like it. But that's just what I think.

 

[Kazuma]

GROT=Get rid of text doesn't flow in at all. It's a bit monotone too. Love the left side, not so much the right

 

[Dark Master]

its pretty monotone

Text destroys flow

the right side seems cluttered

 

[Sean]

I added text at the last minute then I was like, "Oh wait," Dat's why I mae dos bersions mang.

 

[Davey]

V1 is better, I think if you made it a little skinnier it would be good. Colors are lacking but I think it's alright.